Tuesday, February 9, 2010

SOMETIMES EYE CRY

Sometime when i m alone,
I cry because i m on my own,
The tears i cry are bit and warm,
They flow with life and take no form,
i cry because my heart is torn,
and i find it difficult to carry on,
I would cry among my treasured friends,
but who do u know that stops that long,
to help another cry on,
the world moves fast and it would rather pass,
then to stop and see what makes u cry,
It's painful and sad and sometimes i cry,
and no one cares about why.

8 comments:

  1. superb dear jusssssss like uuuuuuuu
    but i request u wheneveru need someone m there for u there

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  2. kyaaaaaa baat hai bhai..........
    emotional.............
    bhi jalwe mein.......

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  3. kya baat hai..........itne dard bhare aansu
    mujhe rona aa rha hai
    bhabhi se kuch hua kya

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  4. well the poem is simply wonderful.i didn't know about your hidden potential and talent.it simply reflects your feelings.
    with hope that these words from your heart may reach to the heart which could understand your feeling in the right way

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  5. WHEN UR EYE HAS CRY...
    remember these lines.......

    aanother turning point, a fork struck in the road..
    time grabs u by the wrist..
    directs u where to go,
    so make the past an dont ask it all why...
    its not a question..
    but a lesson learned in TIME..
    its something UNPREDICTABLE but in the end ITS RIGHT..
    I HOPE YOU HAD THE TIME OF YOUR LIFE!!

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  6. i too write on emotions basically....but you made me emotional yaar....great work....it seems you have lot of pain within.

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  7. nice dear....really it touched my heart..
    wt happened dear such a emotional poem?tell truely i know u..i m always with u

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